ditto, cs...i like it too...it was quite good for a first attempt at lyrics and i can see/hear the possibilities...as for a title...hmmm...how about "Flash"...because of how it talks about coming in like fireworks and leaving a dying flame...just a thought... 
keep writing...that was well done... 
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In sleep he sang to me, in dreams he came
That voice which calls to me and speaks my name
And do I dream again, for now I find
The phantom of the opera is there...inside my mind
Christine/ Phantom Of The Opera
Abondon thought and let the dream decend....
Point of No Return/Phantom Of The Opera
You will forever remain the music
And I…the song you sing
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