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creedsister · 05-29-2004, 04:52 PM

Quote: (Originally Posted by jbjfan) this is a poem that a friend of mine wrote im supposed to get an opinion about it for her. i dont think it's that great but im trying my best to stick with it...

"Whether you see the world either
cold and bitter,
or warm and fuzzy,
do you not notive the rest of the world,
do you not think of the people unknown?"

p.s. told you it was lame.....

I LOVED IT WHOOOOOO

05-29-2004, 04:52 PM	#3
creedsister USER INFO » Status: Tree of Wisdom Posts: 8,290 Joined: Oct 2003 Currently: Offline	Quote: (Originally Posted by jbjfan) this is a poem that a friend of mine wrote im supposed to get an opinion about it for her. i dont think it's that great but im trying my best to stick with it... "Whether you see the world either cold and bitter, or warm and fuzzy, do you not notive the rest of the world, do you not think of the people unknown?" p.s. told you it was lame..... I LOVED IT WHOOOOOO __________________ Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything