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Old 04-01-2004, 01:17 PM   #4
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This was awesome Tremo...

Don't know which verse to pick to be my fav:

The bullets begin to fire,
thunderous reports like cannons thumping in my worn out heart…
I’ve had enough.
When will the golden bullet finish me off?

I’m hit, I begin to bleed.
I’m falling behind, out of breath,
out of ammunition, beaten, nearly dead…


Loved that one!
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Souls...
they float like the memories I've opened,
Go...
and kiss all the butterflies I've broken,
Sow...
their wings to the coat of my misfortune,
Grow...
to reach the plains only I have spoken...


The Path ~by~ ManMade God
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