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Old 07-13-2008, 02:58 AM   #8
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Re: first verse of our new song (unfinished and untitled so far)

Here is some more of it. I forgot about posting it here. Hope you like the rest of it, though it is not all of it, I left the ending out.



" Give Me Back " (just a working title, but will probably be the actual title)

(v1)

i could tell you that I love myself

but I know that its not true

A buried faith inside cant help

to hide contempt for you


the empty shell you left behind

and things we left unsaid

haunt my sleep till I cant find

my way out of my head


seek out destroyed memories

images fractured bring me to my knees

I cry out to you bleeding out my soul

No one answers, IVE FINALLY LOST CONTROL

(chorus)

Give me back all that you stole from me

i recalaim all that is rightfully mine

Give me back what you ripped away

Im stuck here in the threads of time,

so,

GIVE ME BACK!

(v2)

Let me get back on my feet

You dont have to keep me down

Blinded love could never see

that we cannot turn around

the feelings that we try to deny

have us caught in this circle of joy and foolish pride

Our inner selves that we supressed so long

are the ones that we can never hide

(Chorus2)

So

Give me back my indignity

show me the man I used to be

Give me back the assurance of truth

Let it all bleed back out of you

this time

GIVE ME BACK

(V3)

(INTERLUDE SOLO)

(chorus3)
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