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Old 06-20-2005, 05:29 PM   #5
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Quote: (Originally Posted by Ann Allusion) ditto, cs...i like it too...it was quite good for a first attempt at lyrics and i can see/hear the possibilities...as for a title...hmmm...how about "Flash"...because of how it talks about coming in like fireworks and leaving a dying flame...just a thought...

keep writing...that was well done...
i like my long title
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