Welcome
Let me the first to say welcome to Creative Corner...I am always glad to met fellow writers and I think we are all really kind with our comments so look foward to seeing more from you...
Your poem is simply Beautiful..in such a short span it gives such a feeling of depth..
"Brutality of endless emotional rattles
have lost these push and pull battles."
And the imagery...
"Sun-kissed skies
erase opaque nights"
Good work...you make us all look like amateurs...please feel free to read everyone's threads..I know I appreciate critics, I think everyone here does..my threads are Caution-Dark scary stuff and the Brave Thread... again Welcome!!!
