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Forum: Waxing Poetica 05-21-2004, 07:46 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 2,620
Posted By CreedGuy16
From The Very First Moment

I remember the very first moment
In that very second
When I knew I cared
And I knew I wanted to hold you
And I knew I wanted be there
As long as it was with you
And I know I still want that
And I...
Forum: Waxing Poetica 01-08-2004, 10:11 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 2,079
Posted By CreedGuy16
Burning illusions R&R

finally free of the world that I made
I can turn and see the place that I stayed
it burns and crumbles and the smoke fills the sky
I turn and stumble and begin to wonder why
why did everything fall...
Forum: Waxing Poetica 01-02-2004, 01:55 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 2,113
Posted By CreedGuy16
Thats very true Creedsister, i guess im lucky...

Thats very true Creedsister, i guess im lucky that my parents are christians though, sometimes i kinda only see things from my eyes and i guess i should be gratefull i dont have ungodly parents. but...
Forum: Waxing Poetica 01-01-2004, 01:19 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 2,745
Posted By CreedGuy16
That doesnt read right does it? i cant figure out...

That doesnt read right does it? i cant figure out whats wrong w/it..... i think from "What did i do to deserve what iv been givin" its off all the way to the end, any suggestions?
Forum: Waxing Poetica 01-01-2004, 01:15 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 2,745
Posted By CreedGuy16
Dead whispers

what is left that can make me whole
the theft of my life and my soul they stole
nothing feels right and nothing feels real
my spirit bleeds black and is to dead to heal
death kisses my face and holds...
Forum: Waxing Poetica 01-01-2004, 12:45 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 2,113
Posted By CreedGuy16
Yea, i think everyone gets to a point were they...

Yea, i think everyone gets to a point were they have to become who they are and thats just hard for parents i guess. i think it makes them feel like they are loosing control or something.
Forum: Waxing Poetica 01-01-2004, 08:57 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 2,113
Posted By CreedGuy16
My parents esnpired this one. its a long story...

My parents esnpired this one. its a long story but i streacked my hair with red and i have some goth braclets and stuff, well like two. im more skater punk and my mom especialy hates who i am. she...
Forum: Waxing Poetica 12-31-2003, 09:56 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 2,113
Posted By CreedGuy16
Pushing me away R&R

Pushing me away

right now at this point im going to be me
ill fight and I’m showing that I can be free
all the phonieness you cause is killing whats real
all the lonelyness you deal is just going to...
Forum: Waxing Poetica 12-03-2003, 06:59 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,306
Posted By CreedGuy16
poem for u guys, the story behinf this one is...

poem for u guys, the story behinf this one is kinda sad, actually a kid that went to my school killed himself and they say he was listening to linkin park at the time and that why he killed himself,...
Forum: Waxing Poetica 12-02-2003, 09:28 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,190
Posted By CreedGuy16
Speak life take life or give it by the things...

Speak life

take life or give it by the things that you say
your tounge builds them up or it tares them away
and you’ve chosin to kill and there’s blood in your eyes
beating them down for pleasure...
Forum: Waxing Poetica 10-09-2003, 10:55 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,031
Posted By CreedGuy16
a happy one (kinda)

a kinda happy one i guess, hope ya like it :)

Life I Wont Miss

visions of the past still fading away
still hearing echos of things I didn’t say
I see all of this and sit awhile to rest
feeling some...
Forum: Waxing Poetica 10-05-2003, 11:14 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,089
Posted By CreedGuy16
Poem!!!!

hope u like it


Help Me Live

see these thoughts play in my head
they would kill my heart buts its already dead
so hear my cries sing me to sleep
for peace I have lost is why I must weep
so feel my...
Forum: Waxing Poetica 09-22-2003, 11:19 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,103
Posted By CreedGuy16
hey, a song this time

Just a song i wrote, I know the title is a little heavy for some (maybe, maybe not) but its still working (this is my first song) so just tell me what ya think, thanks guys



Kill Me This Way

I’m...
Forum: Waxing Poetica 08-30-2003, 01:05 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,786
Posted By CreedGuy16
Poem

Hope you like it :)

Feeling Misunderstood

The sun rises on my pride today
But refuses to shine to help me see my way
A way I feel cluttered but I just need to see
Cause this feeling inside must...
Forum: Waxing Poetica 08-14-2003, 03:57 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 1,193
Posted By CreedGuy16
Poem

Im really having trouble with this kind of poetry. If you could give me your 2 cents, should i just forget it or just tell me where it needs work etc. thanks

Got Me

Confusion now taking part of who...
Forum: Waxing Poetica 08-08-2003, 12:46 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 956
Posted By CreedGuy16
Hey its me (Sam16) i got a new SN, but here is a poem

Actually a lighter one for you!

P.S. How about the new SN ;)

Creating your Creator

Abiding in a peace I’ve never felt before
Feeling complete and able to settle the score
I tried to give you a...
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