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Forum: Waxing Poetica 01-16-2006, 01:10 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 1,392
Posted By MrSeeker
Off at The Wrist

Off at The Wrist

You asked me to obey
But I will betray
So cut my hands off at the wrist
Because I never wanted to hurt You like this

And though I am the enemy
I feel I must place the blame
On...
Forum: Waxing Poetica 01-16-2006, 01:07 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 1,980
Posted By MrSeeker
The Last Line is The Song Title

The Last Line is The Song Title

How can I hold you
When my hands are broken
How can I kiss you
When my lips still linger with betrayal

With a cold stare and a loss of innocence
Shamed eyes look...
Forum: Waxing Poetica 01-05-2006, 01:32 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,749
Posted By MrSeeker
Of Those That Don't Have Hearts

Of Those That Don't Have Hearts

Ripped apart
The union between body and soul
Dissected and ripped apart

Committed to cut off the ties
Between you and what would have been I
Wed me to the lies
My...
Forum: Waxing Poetica 12-17-2005, 02:20 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 1,212
Posted By MrSeeker
(de)Face the music(k)

(de)Face the music(k)

your song (will go)
unsung
over and over again
making chaotic noise
beautifully chaotic noise
but my heart beats to the rhythem
of a thousand different drums
each one louder...
Forum: Waxing Poetica 12-04-2005, 01:43 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 1,955
Posted By MrSeeker
Thank you :D

Thank you :D
Forum: Waxing Poetica 12-03-2005, 06:45 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 1,955
Posted By MrSeeker
This Love Will Bring Forth Sacrifice...

This Love Will Bring Forth Sacrifice
Which Will Birth Pain
In Return of True Love and Life Everlasting

More than words were exchanged that night
I gave You my life
You gave me the promise of...
Forum: Waxing Poetica 12-01-2005, 01:18 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 2,037
Posted By MrSeeker
thank you much

thank you much
Forum: Waxing Poetica 11-29-2005, 08:05 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 1,403
Posted By MrSeeker
some of my none rhyming poems...

If God Decided To Pick Apart The Angels Wings (version 2)

I'm in love with an angel
She has a broken halo, her wings picked apart
Her poetry is written with her arm and a razor
Traditional in the...
Forum: Waxing Poetica 11-29-2005, 07:31 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 2,037
Posted By MrSeeker
Cut Throat

Cut Throat

Treasure your life with a kiss
Slit your throat, slit your wrist
Forget all of you I will miss
And slit my throat, slit my wrist

I am nothing now
Just tears that fall down your...
Forum: Waxing Poetica 11-29-2005, 07:26 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 1,665
Posted By MrSeeker
To Leave This World With Nothing, But Broken Teeth

To Leave This World With Nothing, But Broken Teeth
I don't want this to sound cliche
But it does in the worst way
And I can't save my life to save my neck
And I'm wondering how much of you I can...
Forum: Waxing Poetica 11-29-2005, 07:21 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 2,265
Posted By MrSeeker
Ask Torn Signs (Kim). She likes my none rhyming...

Ask Torn Signs (Kim). She likes my none rhyming stuff more than rhyming. To Me writing without rhyme is pointless, but I have done it several times. I will go look to find them and post them just for...
Forum: Waxing Poetica 11-24-2005, 01:03 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 2,265
Posted By MrSeeker
Tragedy in The Making

Tragedy in The Making

I will not accept failure like I've accepted this disease
One day at a time I'll bring this to it's knees
With deception in my heart, everything falls
Rotting from inside to...
Forum: Waxing Poetica 11-22-2005, 06:48 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 1,513
Posted By MrSeeker
Thanks. I'm working on a new one that will prove...

Thanks. I'm working on a new one that will prove to be good.
Forum: Waxing Poetica 11-20-2005, 11:47 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 1,513
Posted By MrSeeker
(E)Motion

(E)Motion

The problem lies not in my heart
But in my motion and body
I lack the strength to stand apart
And that kills me

My hands are bound by emotion
My reason fails to understand
I decline...
Forum: Waxing Poetica 11-16-2005, 12:59 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 2,084
Posted By MrSeeker
Thank you very much. :D

Thank you very much. :D
Forum: Waxing Poetica 11-15-2005, 02:32 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 2,084
Posted By MrSeeker
My Words Are as Leaves Falling Upon My Grave

My Words Are as Leaves Falling Upon My Grave

I'm still waiting for this pain to reach it's end
I'm still wondering what part of me I want you to mend

I feel the pressure building up inside
I...
Forum: Waxing Poetica 11-12-2005, 12:17 AM
Replies: 43
Views: 4,389
Posted By MrSeeker
"If someone were to say they didn't like the...

"If someone were to say they didn't like the first line I'd tell them they have no poetic or songwriting intelligence."

Obviously you do... :rolleyes:
Forum: Waxing Poetica 11-12-2005, 12:11 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 2,077
Posted By MrSeeker
Thank you. :) [QUOTE=uncertaindrumer] You rarely...

Thank you. :)

[QUOTE=uncertaindrumer]
You rarely hide things behind metaphors.[QUOTE]
ha....haha....hahahahahahahaha. That right there is funny.

I've kind of been going down hill the past month or...
Forum: Waxing Poetica 11-11-2005, 01:38 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 2,217
Posted By MrSeeker
Meh. I just can't get into it. It seems to be...

Meh. I just can't get into it.

It seems to be just words. I see no feeling behind it. Sorry.
Forum: Waxing Poetica 11-11-2005, 01:30 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 2,077
Posted By MrSeeker
experation date...

experation date...

Dawn is braking and my spine is gone
So I sit pondering where it all went wrong

Here comes the pain
Defaming my name
Setting fire to my hate
Fueling my suicidal fate
Forum: Waxing Poetica 11-11-2005, 01:23 AM
Replies: 43
Views: 4,389
Posted By MrSeeker
Well, someone says they don't like a certain part...

Well, someone says they don't like a certain part and he makes some excuse for it being the way it is, that or changes it all together.

What do you call it?
Forum: Waxing Poetica 11-09-2005, 05:43 PM
Replies: 43
Views: 4,389
Posted By MrSeeker
hmmm, it was ok. It wasn't anything I haven't...

hmmm, it was ok. It wasn't anything I haven't already seen before. But dude, seriously, you are taking away from it piece by piece by trying to please everyone. That's not cool. You should never...
Forum: Waxing Poetica 11-09-2005, 01:11 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 1,342
Posted By MrSeeker
thanks, haha. :D

thanks, haha. :D
Forum: Waxing Poetica 11-09-2005, 02:26 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 1,342
Posted By MrSeeker
Silhouette of Regret

Silhouette of Regret

Walk this field blindly
Trust only what you see
But the truth lies in what is unseen
Not what you forced in between
I acknowledge your lies
And I'll let them bleed from my...
Forum: Waxing Poetica 11-09-2005, 02:21 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,789
Posted By MrSeeker
Hey Julie, thanks! I've been good, thank you. How...

Hey Julie, thanks! I've been good, thank you. How have you been?
Much love <3
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