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Trimontana 05-29-2005 09:10 PM

Random Feelings
 
The emptiness of my voice
calling to anyone.
The memories of a life
that i wanna make back.
Feeling lonely in the
darkness of this body.
I just wanna go and
dont coming back

If for a minute
i could be there.
I would do things
in a different way
no hellos and no good byes.
Lossing myself in the memories.
Missing those streets at night.

Missing someone in my way
i found another instead.
I wanna go and dont coming back.
I wanna lose myself
in those memories
in those streets at night.

creedsister 05-29-2005 10:34 PM

there is just something about those street lights :) i liked it Gabs

Trimontana 05-29-2005 11:07 PM

thanks sister...those streets are NYC streets. i miss that city. the poem in general means all my feelings about i wanna leave this city and start again.

Ann Allusion 05-30-2005 03:10 AM

nice writing, Trimontana. :)

Trimontana 05-30-2005 10:05 AM

Thanks Ann

HR2004 05-31-2005 01:38 PM

that was wonderful!


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