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creedsister 04-10-2004 01:53 PM

Not about love
 
A voice is crying and Screaming deep from within my soul saying dont let me Go i know that it just dont seem right that you hold on to me so tight what is this light that you see in me that i myself cant see is it me or a refliction of who i could be i really dont know because your all that matters to me like a secret thats all mine and when your around i know i wont hit the ground because you just wont back down or let me down if i told you i loved you it would not mean it because its overated word thats left me scared and bruised and used so the word i would say has yet to have name i get so tired that i cant no longer take hiding my feelings inside that i breakdown and cry i feel im running out of time but you come you come a long and say i dont care because i know your really strong and you ease my worries and fears and try to stop all my tears but sometimes i wonder who trys to stop yours and sometimes wonder if you really know i really really know i love you or is it just your job to stay with all thats not seen noir heared i only pray in secret we will make it someday mixed in a days of reality and dreams cant no longer focus it seems but at times it becomes clear like a breath taking breeze that leaves me to gasp for air after i take in a deep sigh then my heart i know my heart does not lie somehow i know you shall be with me when i die!!! this voice brings to my kness so i will say we have no controll what will be will be and i dont see any reason this cant be because if it was not than would we really care anyway i leave here now with no more to say Except this was not about love my but something more in a world that has yet not discoverd its meaning i think what were looking for and cant see past is called the real thing, but its not about love!!!

Dogstar 04-10-2004 07:04 PM

Sweet, creedsister...I really dig this line...

i really dont know because your all that matters to me like a secret thats all mine

creedsister 04-10-2004 08:54 PM

thanks Dogstar

WeatheredWoman 04-10-2004 09:04 PM

Just awesome again Ta!! :kiss: Makes me wonder: What IS this world all about???

My fav line:

...what is this light that you see in me that i myself cant see is it me or a refliction of who i could be

creedsister 04-10-2004 09:48 PM

I take you liked it Then......You Rule stef :jam: :jam:


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