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The Lithium 02-22-2004 04:01 PM

Tonight
 
Hey guys. I actually wrote this lyric last summer when I missed someone to death. I read it now and actually thought it was great, so I thougth I'd share it with you guys! :D

Here you go:

Quote:

Tonight
My minds are surroundend
And my memorys are few
That's when I am needing you
Then the price gets taller
And it pass me through
And the views from the yesterday
Can't be turned away
There isn't time for everyone
Some one have to pay
Pay the price of loneliness...
Suffer, pain and failed

But if you could give me just one love, just one life
Just one more night

And tonight is all we got
Tonight, the very last night
Tonight, a second chance
Tonight, I know you're sad and so am I
Tonight, the very last night

So let's do a try and feel the love tonight

Need some time with you
Want to say something to you
The only chance to tell you
But how can I explane?
How it has passed me through
Life is a chance
Of everyone...Could it be me?
The door is closed now
Tears stream down my face
I would open it if life gave me more space

But if you could give me just one love, just one life
Just one more night

And tonight is all we got
Tonight, the very last night
Tonight, a second chance
Tonight, I know you're sad and so am I
Tonight, the very last night

So let's do a try and feel the love tonight

WeatheredWoman 02-22-2004 05:38 PM

Awesome Lith!!!! :thumbsup:

Very touching!

I like to see you more often here in the Creative Corner. :D

MrSeeker 02-22-2004 05:46 PM

Yea, that was good :D

creedsister 02-23-2004 11:37 AM

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Originally Posted by WeatheredWoman
Awesome Lith!!!! :thumbsup:

Very touching!

I like to see you more often here in the Creative Corner. :D

yes me 2 nice poem by the way

The Lithium 02-23-2004 01:03 PM

Thanks... Well, I frist for me and not for CreedFeed so that's why I easilie forget to share it here! :D

creedsister 02-23-2004 02:06 PM

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Originally Posted by extreme_LITHIUM
Thanks... Well, I frist for me and not for CreedFeed so that's why I easilie forget to share it here! :D

hehe ok

creedsister 02-23-2004 02:09 PM

you know what Extrme i would like no love too see ummmm what all poems you have written you little bratt!!!! HAHA I kill me!! :D :D :D

The Lithium 02-23-2004 02:19 PM

You mean you wanna read 'em all or just want to know why I write, where I get my insperation from and who I'm writing for??

creedsister 02-23-2004 02:26 PM

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Originally Posted by extreme_LITHIUM
You mean you wanna read 'em all or just want to know why I write, where I get my insperation from and who I'm writing for??

no not really with all the other stuff } I would just like to read theme All ya know cool stuff Loooooooooove it :D :

Torn Signs 02-23-2004 05:35 PM

I like the flow and how it is put together. It has a certain rhythm to it. Also it's a good topic to read about, congrats :clap:.

The Lithium 02-24-2004 04:02 AM

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Originally Posted by creedsister
no not really with all the other stuff } I would just like to read theme All ya know cool stuff Loooooooooove it :D :


What, you wanna read like all my love songs?

Quote:

Originally Posted by Torn Signs
I like the flow and how it is put together. It has a certain rhythm to it. Also it's a good topic to read about, congrats :clap:.


Thanks, I'll keep that in mine! :D

creedsister 02-24-2004 02:31 PM

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Originally Posted by extreme_LITHIUM
What, you wanna read like all my love songs?



Thanks, I'll keep that in mine! :D

that would be nice!!!

The Lithium 03-05-2004 09:35 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by creedsister
that would be nice!!!


Well, my love songs is often sad once. Still wanna read 'em?

Aimee 03-05-2004 01:17 PM

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Originally Posted by extreme_LITHIUM
Well, my love songs is often sad once. Still wanna read 'em?


ooh, I do! I do! PS: This is my fave line...
The door is closed now
Tears stream down my face
I would open it if life gave me more space

creedsister 03-05-2004 01:29 PM

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Originally Posted by Aimee
ooh, I do! I do! PS: This is my fave line...
The door is closed now
Tears stream down my face
I would open it if life gave me more space

whooooo Yes I know Aim Old girl I would love to read all this deep stuff that this Bratt is Got HEy Extrme Dont Hold Back On Us Send mine In A pm Too hahaha :2cents: :hammerlol ;) ;)


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