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MrSeeker 02-03-2004 04:16 AM

Broken Love Song
 
"Theres somthing thats been weighing on my mind
I cant help, but think of you all the time
I wish I could say I love you
But thats somthing I know I cant do
Im trying to contain these feelings inside,Im trying to be tame
Because I know if I say those words,you wont feel the same

That just brings the pain

Im hurting inside, Im torn in two
Over the fact that I cant be with you
I hate this pain I feel,it makes me want to die
Instead I'll just lay on the floor and cry

I hate the way I feel when Im with you
Because I know that you dont feel it too
I hate the way we talk all the time
Because I know that you will never be mine
I hate the way I cry myself to sleep at night
Because I know that you dont feel alright

That just brings the pain

Im hurting inside, Im torn in two
Over the fact that I cant be with you
I hate this pain I feel inside
I what to kill myself because I already feel I died"

Thats a bit out of my element,but do you like it?

creedsister 02-03-2004 12:25 PM

Hey seeks its a keeper my brother~`000 ;)

Torn Signs 02-04-2004 06:14 PM

It's cool, as you said a little outta the rhythm, but alright. ;)

MrSeeker 02-04-2004 07:54 PM

Thanks. Im trying to go out of my element more so I can write any type of song. I need more practice though,hehe. :D


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