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first verse of our new song (unfinished and untitled so far)
First verse of new song:
i could tell you that I love myself but I know that its not true A buried faith inside cant help to hide contempt for you the empty shell you left behind and things we left unsaid haunt my sleep till I cant find my way out of my head seek out destroyed memories images fractured bring me to my knees I cry out to you bleeding out my soul No one answers, IVE FINALLY LOST CONTROL (chorus) |
Re: first verse of our new song (unfinished and untitled so far)
that's pretty good man. post the rest
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I will send the rest to any regulars to this site willing to give their email address. Legally I am not allowed to give this song away, but I accept any email as payment. cst-2238152199. Please respect my privacy and do not send it outside this site.I will have cd's and tabs available in 2 months. these songs are in production, so please please please dont share the files with anyone. I just want feedback from yall. Thanks, and God bless.
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Re: first verse of our new song (unfinished and untitled so far)
I see.
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\m/ ..... \m/
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A Big God Bless Ya !!!!
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Very cool, metalchris. It sounds promising. Keep us posted.
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Re: first verse of our new song (unfinished and untitled so far)
Here is some more of it. I forgot about posting it here. Hope you like the rest of it, though it is not all of it, I left the ending out.
" Give Me Back " (just a working title, but will probably be the actual title) (v1) i could tell you that I love myself but I know that its not true A buried faith inside cant help to hide contempt for you the empty shell you left behind and things we left unsaid haunt my sleep till I cant find my way out of my head seek out destroyed memories images fractured bring me to my knees I cry out to you bleeding out my soul No one answers, IVE FINALLY LOST CONTROL (chorus) Give me back all that you stole from me i recalaim all that is rightfully mine Give me back what you ripped away Im stuck here in the threads of time, so, GIVE ME BACK! (v2) Let me get back on my feet You dont have to keep me down Blinded love could never see that we cannot turn around the feelings that we try to deny have us caught in this circle of joy and foolish pride Our inner selves that we supressed so long are the ones that we can never hide (Chorus2) So Give me back my indignity show me the man I used to be Give me back the assurance of truth Let it all bleed back out of you this time GIVE ME BACK (V3) (INTERLUDE SOLO) (chorus3) |
Re: first verse of our new song (unfinished and untitled so far)
Incredible hardcore you can feel an overcoming vibe in those verses STRONG STANDING LYRICS Loved It Blessings And Strengeth :jam: :jam:
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Re: first verse of our new song (unfinished and untitled so far)
thanks. this is a warmup video I was just toying around with a while back, but I took some of it and used it in the recording of this song.
http://myspacetv.com/index.cfm?fusea...oid=36598 497 |
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thank you for reposting the link It was Real :jam: :jam:
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