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my surender
i gave it all i have
you took your love from me gave you my soul and my heart you ripped it to shreads your dishonesty distain for any type of lasting relationship how you played me like a fool and lied to my family and i ,i despise you i gave it my all all that i had you weekend me with your venom this is my surender ive given up hope even tho i havent seen or talked to you in a year i still think of you makes my blood boil all the negativity and drunken slutting around did you even think of me when you fucked someone else on my 21st birthday or drove my moms car intoxicated do you have any self respect left or did you drink it away i wonder i gave it my all all that i had you weekend me with your venom this is my surender lying to my family and i telling them you hadnt been drinking i guess that bottle under your bed was your dogs, gee you must love the attention your drinkin gets getting banned from AA, going to hospitals havin the emts haul your ass of you must love it everyone pittying you payin attention to you cuz for a minute its all about you i surender you won |
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:) that was really good reminds me of strawberry fields really bush like Great Job,
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i like it. it's like your talking to her, instead of writing her a poem. while still poetically(corectly) getting your point across.
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