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inside_us_all04 01-17-2007 04:11 AM

time
 
so i take a little time
cant believe you aint mine
then i realise im outa time

everything isnt goin in line
and my track has run off the rails
and i cant help but think
if i was better youd be mine

wish i was perfect like you
numb like you
and wonderful like you
but here i am on this cold night
all by myself and wishing
you were in my eyes in my life

so i take a little time
cant believe you aint mine
then i realise im outa time

what will it take to make u mine
cuz forever id love to be in your eyes
missing you every single day
wishing the cold nights would go away
and id awaken next to little miss waif

to Vally:aug 05-march 9/06

bilal 01-17-2007 11:08 AM

Re: time
 
:peacelove:

Dogstar 01-17-2007 12:38 PM

Re: time
 
Loneliness and yearning...*sigh*. Nice job, inside_us_all!

HeavensOnFire 01-23-2007 01:50 AM

Re: time
 
You Could Be Mine, But Your Way Out Of Line, With Your Bitch Slap Rapping And Cocaine Tounge You Get Nothing Done, Its Your Will To Survive To Live, My Job To Secure Your Saftey, I Will Rise From Da Ashes Of War, And Block All Targets, Very Beautiful Inside Us All, Haaaaaaaaaaaaaaa, I.ll Be Back ;) Nice Poem By Da Way,

metalchris25 01-23-2007 06:33 PM

Re: time
 
Cool. I like this, though its a little depressing, lol.

HeavensOnFire 01-24-2007 09:14 PM

Re: time
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by metalchris25
Cool. I like this, though its a little depressing, lol.

Awwwwwwwwwwwwww i really did,nt find at all deppresion but very sweet and true, there comes a need to flourish and water is needed, :) i call HAAAAAAAAAAAAA LMAO for the 4 ever dry spell but deppresion Is ok sometimes It water,


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