Spread My Wings
 

Staring in the sky, I get to wandering
Where am i going, where is my motivation?
Well, here I am again wandering things that i cant comprehend
So I smoke all day and drink all night
Hoping the pain will go away

Tell me, when no hopes left
Where can we go...

(chorus)
Please, I lost all my reason
I lost all my soul
I need you to help me gain control
(end)

Staring in the ocean, I get to wandering
Have i met the end, Is this the great voyage?
I laugh at myself again cause ive been wandering things i cant understand
So i drive all day and cry all night
Cutting the pain away

Tell me, when no hopes left
Where can we go...

(chrous)
Please, I lost all my reason
I lost all my soul
I need you to help me gain control

All of my loves in you to spread my wings

Please, I've dropped all my deamons
I've gained control
I understand now please, save my soul
(end)
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im no to sure about this one. " understand" is supposed to be the same line as the on above it, but there wasent enough room.

Re: Spread My Wings
 

:) that was really uplifting THE SUN, goes down the blues come around the choice, is black in white its headache tommorow and heartache tonite, haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa song in my head there your poem reflectied i liked it and the laugh at myself part

Re: Spread My Wings
 

thank u

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:thumbsup:

Re: Spread My Wings
 

:)

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Your Welcome :) :hugs: :hugs: Good Potery Indeed

Re: Spread My Wings
 

:) :)

Re: Spread My Wings
 

:) indeed

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i wish more people commented on my poem. oh well,...

Re: Spread My Wings
 

i know it :) could have left theme speachless~ mabey thats why they did,nt comment But Oh Well ~

Re: Spread My Wings
 

yeah, somthing tells me most of the users dont come to the waxing poetica section

Re: Spread My Wings
 

i like it, no doubt about that.
Maybe you should work on how your words flow, its a bit jagged here and there, but nevertheless its good.

Re: Spread My Wings
 

k, i defenetly will look at them again. thanks.:)