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MrSeeker 08-14-2004 11:33 PM

A famous Kevin poem, it sucks as usual!
 
I see your body, lifeless
Hanging before me
Knife in hand
Throat spewing crimson
Blood running from mouth
Into your heart
Looking into your eyes
I see no life inside
But tears chased by pain
Prying open your body
To reveal a broken heart
Beauty in its purest form
Soul escaping from body
I am in awe as you leave
I watch you fly to Heaven
And then plunge into Hell
Don't worry, my darling
My tears will drown out the sorrow.

creedsister 08-15-2004 11:31 AM

Hey sucks as usual!!!!!!!! i know u did,nt give this one a title so i didnt have anything better todo si i gave it one for ya!!!!! Throat Spewing Crimson Blood Running From Mouth in to your heart !!!! Awsome Line That Line is what inspired the Title :D

Dogstar 08-15-2004 07:15 PM

WOW, that is some heavy visual stuff! Great job!

MrSeeker 08-15-2004 10:11 PM

Thanks much, hehehe... Just me messing around as usual. I've been writing a lot again and I got more up beat stuff then what I usually write. I'm sure all of you will enjoy it, atleast i hope. Me and Kim wrote one,but I dont know if I should post it because its up to her so maybe you guys will see it,maybe not. Welp, Im off. Much love

JulieCitySlicker 08-17-2004 11:25 PM

I'm with Kerri on that wow ;)

MrSeeker 08-18-2004 08:47 PM

Thanks Julie :D


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