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creedsister 06-25-2004 12:15 AM

Part of me
 
Part Of Me Sets Here While Part of Me Is Gone Cant See through A Wall Thats Proctecting me From A Forbidden Fall I Fear That Fall Do I Have To Take The Fall ? To Rise Again And Stand Tall Is The Question I Asked, I Now Feel As If Its Part Of Me I Know You Have Been There Its A Part Of Me I Foreseen My Own Fall You Made Me Strong Enough Not To Make The Same Fall Only Love And Sacrafice Could Have Kept Me from The Place Where The Memorys Of Peace Haunt And Where You Feel Betrayed And Forgotten Everything Was A Reminder Of Thine First Love, Nothing Was Ever Like It Was Before Beyond Broken A Part Of you Said That Used To Be Me Oh Father why Did You Leave Me When I Never Left You All the pain that breaks inside of you Is A Part Of Me You Have Been Through What Would Kill Me I DO KNOW THE LIFES thats in my hands it breathes fire in to me and sets me free I Know its been harder for you than it has been for me because its all a part of me Inside And All Around Me It shakes Me And Moves Me Its A Part Of Me As You Bleed Inside For Me Its A Part Me, its killing me that you care so much longing for mine touch but you must Hush and swallow your insides Choke on your own tears let out your fears your stregnth Is A Iron Wall Thats Kept From that nightmare of a fall dont give up dont give in Im Proud Of You This Was One Of The Ways I I Would Let You Know It Took All Of Me To Save All Of Me From The Fall So Let Thine Stregneth Be Drained It Shall Be Restored Stregneth Is Part Of Me Because You Are Now A Part Of Me !!!!!!!!!!

Dogstar 06-27-2004 06:11 PM

Wow, creedsister...full of your usual emotion. I loved this line:
Choke on your own tears let out your fears

Sweet.

creedsister 06-27-2004 06:22 PM

Thanks thats the part i liked as well

HR2004 06-28-2004 10:45 PM

beautiful!! :)

creedsister 06-29-2004 11:52 PM

thank you im working on one now Titled , to make a long story short :D its long!!!!


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