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If I could I would
Do my part Open my heart Stoke the fire Unleash my desire If I could If I could I would Play the card Let down my guard Crash the wall Answer the call If I could If I could I would Cast the line Claim what is mine Live the dream Capture the sunbeam If I could If I could I would Proudly stand Accept your hand Fill the hole Complete my soul But I can’t |
well written,,,
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yep well written, it has a good structure to it. |
Wow. I really really like that one. I want it to be longer. Why can't the writer claim what is thiers? What holds them back?
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Hahahah, yeah, you could say that, creedsister ;)...Thanks for the kind words, you guys.
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beautiful writing, dogstar...know the feeling...altho, there is always hope...ya think?...one can always have that... ;)
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Hehehehehehe... Ann, yeah, I still have hope...sometimes ;). Glad you enjoyed it, though :) |
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