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MrSeeker 08-17-2004 12:09 AM

just checking something
 
Holding on to pain
Just let go, my love sustains you
When everythings the same
Help you with all you've been through

I cannot deny
That though Im plagued I feel no sickness
Even though I try
I fall apart and die of weakness

I should have seen this coming a mile away
I shouldnt have turned my back and wished to fade
Buckled under all the weight and turned to grey
Couldnt help, but run when I should have stayed

I am a man drowned by sorrow
Used all the strength that I could borrow
The face I hide will now bleed forever more
Until death greets me at my door.

creedsister 08-17-2004 04:14 AM

Word To Yo Mama It Checked Out Did Kim Help You With That One ;) :jam: :jam:

JulieCitySlicker 08-17-2004 11:23 PM

That was really good Kevin ;)
I liked it a lot :)

MrSeeker 08-18-2004 08:42 PM

Thanks alot. No, Kim didnt help with this one. :)

Ann Allusion 08-19-2004 12:34 PM

nice writing, Mr. Seeker...:)
enjoyed reading it.

~peace

Dogstar 08-19-2004 01:02 PM

Way to go, MrSeeker! I loved these two lines...nicely done:
Buckled under all the weight and turned to grey
Couldnt help, but run when I should have stayed

MrSeeker 08-19-2004 08:23 PM

thanks much :D


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