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Holding on to pain
Just let go, my love sustains you When everythings the same Help you with all you've been through I cannot deny That though Im plagued I feel no sickness Even though I try I fall apart and die of weakness I should have seen this coming a mile away I shouldnt have turned my back and wished to fade Buckled under all the weight and turned to grey Couldnt help, but run when I should have stayed I am a man drowned by sorrow Used all the strength that I could borrow The face I hide will now bleed forever more Until death greets me at my door. |
Word To Yo Mama It Checked Out Did Kim Help You With That One ;) :jam: :jam:
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That was really good Kevin ;)
I liked it a lot :) |
Thanks alot. No, Kim didnt help with this one. :)
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nice writing, Mr. Seeker...:)
enjoyed reading it. ~peace |
Way to go, MrSeeker! I loved these two lines...nicely done:
Buckled under all the weight and turned to grey Couldnt help, but run when I should have stayed |
thanks much :D
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