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Dogstar 07-18-2004 03:17 PM

Kill the Lights
 
There’s a sickness hanging over me
Circling like a starving vulture
Watching for the bits and pieces
Of everything that made me whole
There’s a darkness overtaking me
Lurking like a bloated spider
Thirsting for the blood and sweat
Of everything that fucker stole

Kill the lights, close my eyes
To the bitter taste that I despise
Kill the lights, close my eyes
To the open sores that burn inside

A hollow veneer clouds the reflection
Fading like the fog in a dream
Stealing from the silver chalice
Everything that I rendered dear
The cracked hand of fate slithers toward me
Creeping like a sea of lava
Consuming all of the memories
Of everything that fed my fear

Kill the lights, close my eyes
To the piercing pain that thrives inside
Kill the lights, close my eyes
To the silent cries that I deny

creedsister 07-18-2004 10:20 PM

Im speachless Thirsting For The Blood And Sweat Of Everything The F$*# Stole Couldnt have said it better myself

Dogstar 07-18-2004 10:46 PM

Thanks, creedsister!

Ann Allusion 07-19-2004 12:45 AM

Yeeeouch!...that sucker stings like rubbing salt into the wounds... :eek:
some strong writing, dogstar...but done very well.

Dogstar 07-19-2004 01:00 AM

Heh, sorry 'bout that, Ann :D.

creedsister 07-19-2004 10:37 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ann Allusion
Yeeeouch!...that sucker stings like rubbing salt into the wounds... :eek:
some strong writing, dogstar...but done very well.

I found it Strong It made me feel better

Dogstar 07-20-2004 12:17 AM

Wow, thanks, creedsister! That's pretty cool. You know, I was kind of uptight when I was writing it, but I felt better, too, after I was done with it :D.

creedsister 07-20-2004 02:05 AM

Cool :thumbsup:


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