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Dogstar 12-15-2003 03:52 AM

Blind Faith
 
Would that I had seen the signs
Of waning interest repeating lines
Didn’t care to look your way
Blind I turned so silent stayed

River of tears soaked you through
A callous heart revealed to you
Struck you down, breath it stole
Left you drained and turned you cold

Birthday passed a thoughtless gift
Given to mend a growing rift
Nonchalant she let you fall
Thunder clapping hit the wall

Medicated mind you craved
Fed desire long depraved
Self-inflicted wound you drew
Indifference wasn’t lost on you

Would that I had seen the signs
Of waning interest tired eyes
Didn’t care to look your way
Forever now am bound to pay

SCOTTSMYMAN 12-15-2003 09:41 AM

:clap: :clap: AWESOME! I love it Kerri!

Aimee 12-15-2003 12:42 PM

Yes, I can relate. That's my fave of yours so far.

creedsister 12-15-2003 04:57 PM

Another good one Dogstar

Dogstar 12-15-2003 09:00 PM

Thanks a bunch, you guys :)

TeriB19 12-15-2003 09:07 PM

I agree, that's my favorite of yours. I can feel the pain completely.

MrSeeker 12-16-2003 02:19 AM

:clap: very good!!!

Creed_Defaultgirl 12-16-2003 09:03 PM

Emotions.....wow! That Was Great!

Dogstar 12-16-2003 11:09 PM

Thanks!!!

Sheila63 12-20-2003 06:38 PM

Great poem, Dogstar!!:clap: :clap:

JulieCitySlicker 12-20-2003 10:53 PM

Awesome poem Kerri :D

cjme 12-20-2003 11:05 PM

I'm a few days late but...WOW


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