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MissSeeker 06-04-2005 09:40 AM

Dark Town
 
Dark Town

I look at the sky of this town
overshadowed by dark clouds
but how many really know
the darkness of it's crown
the place where beauty is sold
where sad sad stories are told
where the price of the soul
is measured in gold

You've sold out all that's true
imprisoned wild horses
butterflies that try desperatly
to spread their wings
hanging on a string
angels don't come here anymore
bringing salvation here is in vain
this place on earth is too stained

Ann Allusion 06-04-2005 12:25 PM

Quote:

angels don't come here anymore
bringing salvation here is in vain
this place on earth is too stained

a very dramatic ending...xcellent! :jam:

HR2004 06-04-2005 11:08 PM

Omg words cannot say how good that was!

creedsister 06-04-2005 11:53 PM

Oh I CAN THAT WAS REALLY GOOD :jam: :jam: :jam: :jam:

MissSeeker 06-05-2005 07:03 AM

Thank you, it means a lot to me. :)

creedsister 06-05-2005 12:23 PM

yes the opening rocked :D :)


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