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Dogstar 07-17-2006 08:42 PM

Black Gold
 
I haven't written in ages, but today I felt the urge. The fruits of my labored labor :D:

Black Gold

The tainted chalice sears their soiled hands
As they raise it up in shallow victory
For all to see and bow accordingly

The bullies ascend their pulpits
As they thump their chests in earnest
So haughty are the unmasked marauders

They feign disdain for the blistering pain
As they justify their deluded quest
To be the kings of the bountiful hill

Trampling resolve
Wringing out the red
Bite the rotten apple
Chew until you’ve bled

Itchy fingers trigger the gunslingers
As they shred their knowing victims
With a barrage of rhetoric worn thin

The misguided lemmings take their places
As they horde their buckets of black gold
Chanting reason is treason in unison

Trampling resolve
Wringing out the red
Feed the green disease
Drink until you’re dead

inside_us_all04 07-18-2006 11:38 PM

Re: Black Gold
 
tottaly awsome, really sharp imagry,,


p.s cudo's for takin the name of a killer soul asylum song name too;)

bilal 07-19-2006 11:39 AM

Re: Black Gold
 
wow.......there wasnt one line in which i did.nt flip the dictionary......thanks for adding couple to my vocabulary.... apart.... wonderful iimages kept comin.....

Dogstar 07-19-2006 01:42 PM

Re: Black Gold
 
:D Thanks much, you guys :)

Rocketqueen 08-24-2006 02:14 AM

Re: Black Gold
 
Thank You Doggy for me that was a visual of what i see that taunts me i really liked the unmasked part DOGGY Loved It ....it relly help let out that Godly Anger that dont cease ...Nagpo wrote a few of his in a couple of threads that like AHHHHHHHH a nerve Relaxer Again Awsome Work!!! Doggy

Dogstar 08-29-2006 09:25 PM

Re: Black Gold
 
Thanks as always, Rocketqueen :)

Rocketqueen 08-31-2006 10:45 PM

Re: Black Gold
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Dogstar
Thanks as always, Rocketqueen :)

thanks as Always Doggy i love your use for words As always :)

bilal 12-22-2006 02:46 PM

Re: Black Gold
 
came back for this one..... :D

nagpo 12-22-2006 04:12 PM

Re: Black Gold
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by bilal
came back for this one..... :D

holy crud this threads old

Dogstar 12-23-2006 01:25 PM

Re: Black Gold
 
LOL, bilal :hugs:

GrafiTTied 12-24-2006 08:01 AM

Re: Black Gold
 
Wow.......just wow......

HeavensOnFire 12-26-2006 10:16 PM

Re: Black Gold
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by nagpo
holy crud this threads old

not really but its always up for topic, :) i love such topics even more so whatching trip over their own lies,untill they believe theme and fade so give,me their due,But WIPING you out was the masters master plan ;) HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAA, HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA, its all condradiction anyway ,

HeavensOnFire 12-26-2006 10:21 PM

Re: Black Gold
 
[quote=bilal]came back for this one. j/k haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa, it was awsome good potery can make you feel so much better

HeavensOnFire 05-12-2007 02:19 AM

Re: Black Gold
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by bilal
came back for this one..... :D

HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA ME TOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO, MUHEHAHAHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA, :flamer:

HeavensOnFire 05-12-2007 02:22 AM

Re: Black Gold
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by nagpo
holy crud this threads old

:D I KNOW IT But not a day goes by ;) it does not cross my mine


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