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Deserted
As I lay here
I am stranded Unable to Articulate my thoughts Blinking, I'm reminded Of my Self destructing acts Bleeding And I'm broken My heart's Hollowed to it's last I may not Have no future But atleast I have my feet So no matter Where I'm standing I'll have my Mothers teet I may not have water I may not have lots of things Instead I stand at the desert Wishing for lots of things As the moon shines, the brighter As well as my hopes and dreams I grasp for the water And the clouds, they start covering And I wan't to know And I have to - got to know If this world Is where I belong To tell you the truth Wishes are made for fools So I run And run, and I got to run And I run Towards the sun |
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well...at least you CAN articulate probaply...I jus't can't get what's on my mind on paper. And there's really no things for...keep on writing!!
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ha, thanks. u keep on trying, i'm sure you'll write something great.
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to tell you the truth wishes Are Made For Fools, Strong Verse I liked That The Entire Thing It Kinda Defined DESOLATION if i was at a potery reading and asked someone To try And To Define DESOLATION and what it means It would be a piece Just Like This Again Awsome Job Nagpo
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Thanks:)
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your welcome i got some new stuff too that is postble Haaa i hope to get it out soon guys
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cool, same here
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ah, can't wait. this place is comin alive.
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