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Another poem
I was doing some writing this afternoon and wrote the following poem:
Revelation I see things in a new and different light I see hope and freedom where there once was only a glimmer of both It helps give me strength to continue the fight It renews my spirit and energizes my soul to new heights |
I love it Sheila. It is really good. I still haven't sat down and written anything. Maybe I will get a minute to do so soon. I really like your poems, they make you think. Keep 'em comin' girl, you are very talented.
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Thank you so much, Carrie.:) Your thoughtful words mean a lot to me. I was doing some journaling before I wrote it. I'd love to read some of your writing if you want to share it.
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Hi Sheila, :)
I like it!! :banana: It is very rich with emotion. I love the title. :dancing: Really feeling the lines; I see hope and freedom where there once was only a glimmer of hope They speak to me. Now, I know you are a poet!! Keep them coming!! My best to you!! ~Honey~;) |
Thanks, Honey.:) It's great to hear that my thoughts/words speak to you.:D I appreciate the encouragement too.
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Sheila, that was fantastic!!
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Thanks, Teri.:) I'm glad you liked it.
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I loved this poem too. :angel:
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Thanks again, Kris.:) I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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Dang Girl... I think you're just another Wordsworth in disguise ;) But seriously, it's hard to believe you haven't written before, or have you? Maybe when you were younger? Keep 'em comin! This was my favorite line (about hope & freedom)
there once was only a glimmer of both PS-Carrie, I think you should share too. :2cents: |
Thank you so much, Aimee.:) I can honestly say that I've never done any writing before, even as a kid. Growing up, I thought I was a terrible writer. It's something I started doing just recently. I've been journaling for about 2 years but I've never done any creative writing before.
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