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Nothing Big
By: Amy Aumick 2004
Why do my lips Burn to Confess All the sins I have yet to commit? Perhaps it is easier to Ask for forgiveness, Than Permission. |
That was great Amy. Dare I say a little on the sexy side. I love the poems that say the most with so few words. :clap:
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Those first two lines are killer, Amy! Awesome job, as usual!
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:clap: :clap: :clap: I like it. Short, to the point, and impacting.
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you better go straight For Forgivness Skip the premisson, Part, haha, Im really in to your Stuff Aim, but i found this one funny in a way,
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Yes, Sister... It is about the fact that we are all sinners on this earth. I don't care how perfect you try to be there is no one human being perfect. That I am forgiven before I even sin is truly a delerious pleasure to me. Mistakes suck, but they help us learn. Thanks for the comments, y'all. Sexy, yes...just a hint. ;)
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i know its weird girl but i here what your saying, Rock on!!!!
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