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Aimee 04-06-2004 02:06 PM

Nothing Big
 
By: Amy Aumick 2004

Why do my lips
Burn to Confess
All the sins
I have yet to commit?
Perhaps it is easier to
Ask for forgiveness,
Than Permission.

SCOTTSMYMAN 04-06-2004 04:33 PM

That was great Amy. Dare I say a little on the sexy side. I love the poems that say the most with so few words. :clap:

Dogstar 04-07-2004 03:50 AM

Those first two lines are killer, Amy! Awesome job, as usual!

TeriB19 04-07-2004 10:56 AM

:clap: :clap: :clap: I like it. Short, to the point, and impacting.

creedsister 04-07-2004 11:31 AM

you better go straight For Forgivness Skip the premisson, Part, haha, Im really in to your Stuff Aim, but i found this one funny in a way,

Aimee 04-07-2004 03:39 PM

Yes, Sister... It is about the fact that we are all sinners on this earth. I don't care how perfect you try to be there is no one human being perfect. That I am forgiven before I even sin is truly a delerious pleasure to me. Mistakes suck, but they help us learn. Thanks for the comments, y'all. Sexy, yes...just a hint. ;)

creedsister 04-07-2004 10:25 PM

i know its weird girl but i here what your saying, Rock on!!!!


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