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Jeany's Garden


A never ending of flowers abroad
Up high in the Heavens
Where the lights intensity shines bright
The aura of pontency from the Omnipotent
Scattered lights and souls of the beauty slumber
The clouds like Jade of its own from the sea
The panorama was revealed by an Angel
Layered was the soul of one
Golden hair was her mind of luster
Jade eyes was her sea of imagery
Her own flesh devoured the cradle that mounted
from hell to its own reign
The falls of waters of pearls
manipulated the very one soul
Her own flesh was gold buring in her heart
Unfurling and expansion of the brightest,
glorious light in Heaven

That was good SmEeKy :D

i liked it too really sweet :D

thanks u guys :)

that was deep and very beautiful!
*snaps*
snaps for you, a real poet!

that was beautiful.. if I had to choose my fave part (very difficult to do), it would be this part...
Her own flesh devoured the cradle that mounted
from hell to its own reign
The falls of waters of pearls
manipulated the very one soul

thanks I didnt know it was that good

Again Smeeky...your talent is incrediable...I loved it

thank u goddess:)

Good poem! Wish I could write like that, but I can't write worth a squat! :(
Keep up the good work! :)

oh Im sure u can