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Ann Allusion 08-23-2004 10:35 PM

Grand Design
 
Grand Design

Would that you doubt my dedication
Could deliver the coup de gras…
The final blow of indignation
With nothing to break my fall…
Now all the walls have crumbled
To reality we’re bound
Standing in the rubble
More lost than I am found

The aftermath of years gone by
Are deemed to memory
On broken wings I try to fly
Fighting to break free...

Holding on tho strength is failing
Can’t help but still believe
Through changing winds prevailing
Birth’s given thoughts conceived…
This night of transformation done
The sun again will shine
We’ll finish what was once begun
Within this grand design.

©2004
Susan D.

creedsister 08-23-2004 10:45 PM

Whoooooooooooooooo Great Work :thumbsup:

HR2004 08-25-2004 04:53 PM

good one!

Ann Allusion 08-25-2004 09:02 PM

thanks for reading everyone...:)

Dogstar 08-28-2004 12:35 PM

Wow, those visuals made me think of 9/11. Powerful stuff, Ann.


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