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HR2004 06-29-2005 10:21 PM

Great feelings
 
The greatness too great...
The longing too strong...
The happiness too real...
Oh what I feel...
Wrapped in your arms...
The warmth too hot...
The time too short...
The passion too much...
Or just enough...
You look at me...
And all I can do is blush...
You gaze at me and all get lost...
The background no longer there...
Everyone else now a big blurr...
The noise that once sounded...
Now a silence echo's...
And trails all around...
Your eyes pleading...
No way to look away...
From you...
Never could tell you no...
Or ever say...
I didnt love you...
The darkness creeps...
But isn't strong enough...
To tear us apart...
When I start to get scared...
You quickly grab me...
Embrace and tell me its ok...
When tears flow down...
Your kisses wipe them away...
Like warm drops of heaven upon my cheeks...
Oh this great feeling...

creedsister 06-29-2005 11:04 PM

Amazing Writing... :jam: :jam: :jam:

HR2004 06-30-2005 11:24 AM

thanks!

Ann Allusion 06-30-2005 12:03 PM

beautiful...:rockon:


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