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TrulyAmazing 04-12-2010 07:32 PM

Re: Midnight Lovers
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by jabble524
Thanks for the kind feedback. In reflection, is where we often find the secrets to life.

your welcome very much indeed in most cases it is peace be with you

jabble524 04-26-2010 01:40 PM

Re: Midnight Lovers
 
Shedding Schisms

Shedding skin at sunset
I succumb to my subconscious
And sell my soul to stimulate
Sullen and subdued senses

Savoring sensations, as I spiral
Into a sea of self-loathing
Where the severed serpent speaks of
The gold within my shadow

Starving for control, I slither into
The sanctuary of self-reproach
Safe from the sacrifice required
To heal the schisms

jabble524 08-09-2010 12:39 PM

Re: Midnight Lovers
 
Denial

I feel the cat’s claws, digging into my tongue
When my reflection, asks who I am
I never mourned you
Just fed you to my shadow

Heartbreak led to hedonism
Created a cornucopia of denial
With neatly decorated lies
And cleverly crafted excuses

Disenchanted and desensitized
Desperately clinging to vanity
As insecurity starts to claw through

Speechless
Crawling back to my castle
Where phantom limbs
Caress romantic memories

Undertow (Swim Away)

You carved out my heart
But I sharpened the knife
Betrayal turned into control
When you begged for forgiveness

Sacrificed my dreams and desires
Thought I could love you, and you’d change
Enabled with love, while reason atrophied
Second chances disguised as compassion

You could smell loneliness
Like blood in the water

Caught in the undertow
I saw your fin approaching
But didn’t have the self esteem
To swim away

TrulyAmazing 11-11-2010 08:30 PM

Re: Midnight Lovers
 
After Midnight We Going Let It All Hang Out, :laugh: first thing to came to mind, sorry i missed this one, a lot of taboo topics un folding in that one, Sacraficed , my dreams and desires, thought i could love you, and you changed enabled with love, its what i call the hunger of the massive,s and the hidden mind confusing shimmers of hope passing to and fro then everything moves to and fro passes like ships but u dont move from certian awakings and conclusions and so forth, love believes all things hopes all things and endures all things, there comes a time when that fine line of superficale love some times clouds compromise a lot of both maketh one understand the greatest love of all, who promised only hope and the greater outcome for all, thanks for sharing peace be with you.............:rockon:

adparaiki 11-27-2010 06:44 PM

Re: Midnight Lovers
 
i really liked it, i like the imagery i get when i read those words.

TrulyAmazing 11-28-2010 09:27 AM

Re: Midnight Lovers
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by adparaiki
i really liked it, i like the imagery i get when i read those words.

yes indeed, as long as the messages reaches i feel there be nothing wrong with mad desire, desire is madness some can,t define with that messsage because the lavished gift was not for all to grasp and endure, without loosing there jobs and their loved ones, for their example its left THE Blessed Heirs with confusing a feeling of coldness, Because being partakers of mortals fears all though even you may be not IMOURTAL , not yet it can seem so as a vain thing, and something we wish to forget, i,ve always said the danger zones our for us all is when those being brought close to IMOURTALTIY, which the prophet paul spoke, and those which be confused, in a place of preseverance and another more lavishied in wisdom than the other, but more than able to overcome and still save the day when the 2 beings collide in the same state when counsel is needed and preseverance is needed, and that message BE STILL AND KNOW THAT I,am GOD, who never uttlery forsakes us, and the GOD who Loveth His Sacrafices Above All He Named Their Home Is Dwelling Place, Its The Message Of Tradtion And Still Would You Believe To This Very Day The Tradtion Of Our Elders Still Leaves A Sting, when the sun be to hot he would shelter us, with these issuies , as the foe was made to become the footstool, and none of us are crazy, but Are CELESTICAL,


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