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HR2004 10-12-2004 11:39 AM

Dancing in the rain.
 
As I look out my window.
Out on to the cloudy sky's.
As that first raindrop falls to the ground.
As all the earth gets a little darker.
As the rain falls steadily.
All seems to be at peace.
All troubles drowned with the rain.
There is no more pain.
We feel no more vain against each other.
We just come togetger.
The rain keeps falling making sweet music.
That feels the air.
Makes me want to go dancing in it.
But people say why dance in the rain when you,
can dance all day inside.
I tell them its not the same.
I need someone who loves to dance in the rain.
Someone who thinks its fun.
somone who can close their eyes and remember us dancing in the rain.
As i grabbed your hand and took you outside in to the rain.
I began to dance then you did the same.
You danced with me in the rain.
As my hair got all messed up you didnt care.
we were free without worry.
If we fell in the mud so what.
Thanks for dancing with me in the rain.

creedsister 10-12-2004 11:59 AM

;) blame it on the rain :D that was awsome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ann Allusion 10-12-2004 01:16 PM

"let the children play inside your heart always..."
and nothing brings that out like dancin' in the rain.... :)
very visual writing...

HR2004 10-12-2004 04:09 PM

thank you!


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