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Ann Allusion 10-29-2004 06:09 PM

Old Soul's Call
 
Old Soul’s Call

Behind old eyes
See the wisdom they hold
Steeped in rich history
Once proud and bold
Now set aside
Like a used book
Put on a shelf …
No second looks

Behind old eyes
What do you see
Visions of your
Own mortality…
The coming of death
Upon quiet wings
Brings peaceful sleep...
To age-ed it sings

Behind old eyes
The message is lost
To the youth of today
At a terrible cost...
Such wisdom and truth
Could be shared by all
If only they heard
The old soul’s call….

©2004
Susan D.

HR2004 10-29-2004 10:08 PM

that was amazing!!

creedsister 11-01-2004 06:51 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by HR2004
that was amazing!!

I loved the last line Awsome


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