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creedsister 02-25-2005 11:26 PM

Leashed
 
Leashed Is My Core Leashed Is Victory How Close We Come To Each Others Core Leashed Is Victory As The World Has Started to To Come Face To Face With Its Dying Fate Victory Is Unleashed As We Gather As We Call Each Other And Know Each Other Leashed Victory How Close We Have BecomeTo Each Others Core Victory Is My Love Victory Is The Love I Have For You Victory Is This Broken Road I Travel That I,ve Felt Like I Was On Before And Held Tight To Every Victory Leashed Was The Last Tear I Cryed And The Last Whisper Made Behind It Was Victory I Love You That Much I Love Leashed Is All Temptation Out Of My Way Victory Leashed Is My Chains Trying To Choke And Come Undone With That Which They Hate Understanding Leashed Is Victory Oh How I Needed You And Oh I Love You With Breath Sweeter Than Life How Close We Come To Each Others Core Leashed Is A Wheel That Keeps On Turning No One Can Survive Under That Wheel Its Your Love :) Victory Is The Broken Road I Travel I,ve Felt Like I Was On Before And Held Tight To Every Victory Leashed Was The Last Tear I Cryed And The Last Whisper Made Behind It Victory Is Unleashed In The Core Of My Soul Not By Me But He Which Lives In Me Time And Time Again You Will Know I,am Victory Dont You Yet See When I Went Down I Did It For You When I Arose I Did It For You I,am Victory Unleashed And You Will Know That I,am When I,am Your Only Victory .....Leashed Is My Core Leashed Is How Close We Have Become Inside The Core The Last Tear I Cryed And The Last Whisper I Made Behind It Was Victory I Love You That Much Keashed Is All Temptation Out Of My Way Victory Leashed Is My Chains Choking And Coming Undone Which that which they hate understanding victory is tears of still more miles to go but victory is perfection and its leashed

Ann Allusion 02-27-2005 07:08 PM

really liked this one, CS.. the use of "leashed" is quite indicitive of being held back or restrained...this writing conveys a vision of not wanting to "hold back", but it is being done for a reason...and the conflict therein feeds the emotional content...:rockon: :jam:

creedsister 02-27-2005 10:12 PM

:rockon: :jam: :jam: :jam: :jam:

HR2004 03-02-2005 12:58 AM

I really liked it too lately i havent had time to read but im glad I did that was really good I mean seriously!

creedsister 03-02-2005 01:28 AM

Thank You***


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