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HR2004 01-25-2005 05:12 PM

Reveal
 
The begining of a new.
Things that i knew were true.
The way we looked at each other.
But now im not sure.
I held you tight.
You didn't push away.
Still I dont know the feelings you hide inside.
I put mine away as well.
For i fear what i might reveal.
But it seems you have a way of seeing right through me.
Wish i knew the feelings you keep behind those bars.
For some reason i cant see that far.
You smile at me and i sink deep into those eyes of yours.
Your laugh warms me up inside.
Your soft touch excites me.
You hold me tight and i dont want to let go.
But i do.
still to me a mystery you are.
wont you let me see behind the locked bars.
Unlock your heart let me in.
Reveal to me the you.
The you inside.

creedsister 01-26-2005 02:12 AM

Nice :jam:

Ann Allusion 01-26-2005 12:56 PM

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nice

"ditto"...:jam:

HR2004 01-26-2005 03:11 PM

thank you both i changed my signature too.lol


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