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creedsister 01-18-2004 09:07 PM

no Logic no myth
 
I see your pain behind the laughter remains the neverernding rain i here your voice and its always the same why in the shadows must i always remain would it make you feel better if i told you i feel the same and if i could i would wish us away to days of neverending rays of sunshine but in this world there is no such thing but in my heart you will always remain the same and if hatred knew us for who we truly our we would have not got this far far by distance but not by heart there is were there all the anwsers lye all tho we die everyday it seems love walks with us not far from us i know our hearts will not perish in the dust they are strong ones we must have sure found out by now but they dont belong to us any how or else they would sure as hell be dead by now you live and breathe im my soul sometimes its very cold and then again your warmth sooths my soul like rain coming down on a sunshine day which makes the rain and tears and fears a place to hide from all the fears and all the tears and if that made since to you then you must have been seen in time of were know man has seen you cant look back you cant walk away in the middle of being cast to and fro you will know how and you will know when when this fight of sweet misery will end and untill then we can not see whats in it for both you and me thats what drives us crazy it seems but only the strong will survive our hearts are tied and if one takes the fall i know the one wont leave the other behind our hearts will surley bind some place in time it will be time too past the wine

WeatheredWoman 01-18-2004 09:24 PM

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Originally Posted by creedsister
I see your pain behind the laughter remains the neverernding rain i here your voice and its always the same why in the shadows must i always remain would it make you feel better if i told you i feel the same and if i could i would wish us away to days of neverending rays of sunshine but in this world there is no such thing but in my heart you will always remain the same and if hatred knew us for who we truly our we would have not got this far far by distance but not by heart there is were there all the anwsers lye all tho we die everyday it seems love walks with us not far from us i know our hearts will not perish in the dust they are strong ones we must have sure found out by now but they dont belong to us any how or else they would sure as hell be dead by now you live and breathe im my soul sometimes its very cold and then again your warmth sooths my soul like rain coming down on a sunshine day which makes the rain and tears and fears a place to hide from all the fears and all the tears and if that made since to you then you must have been seen in time of were know man has seen you cant look back you cant walk away in the middle of being cast to and fro you will know how and you will know when when this fight of sweet misery will end and untill then we can not see whats in it for both you and me thats what drives us crazy it seems but only the strong will survive our hearts are tied and if one takes the fall i know the one wont leave the other behind our hearts will surley bind some place in time it will be time too past the wine


This is awesome again sis... :thumbsup:
In your poems I always find thoughts, feelings, words, fears.. that I can relate to!

But you promissed me ehh... periods, paragraphs, don't know how to call all those things ;) ;) ;)

creedsister 01-18-2004 09:31 PM

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Originally Posted by WeatheredWoman
This is awesome again sis... :thumbsup:
In your poems I always find thoughts, feelings, words, fears.. that I can relate to!

But you promissed me ehh... periods, paragraphs, don't know how to call all those things ;) ;) ;)

no i did,nt Lol and if true be known i dont know how to use the paragraphs :confused: :dorky: :)

WeatheredWoman 01-18-2004 09:36 PM

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Originally Posted by creedsister
no i did,nt Lol and if true be known i dont know how to use the paragraphs :confused: :dorky: :)


Yes you did!!! :D

creedsister 01-18-2004 09:42 PM

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Originally Posted by WeatheredWoman
Yes you did!!! :D

no i did,nt but i wont get upset about it you win ;)

WeatheredWoman 01-18-2004 09:44 PM

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Originally Posted by creedsister
no i did,nt but i wont get upset about it you win ;)



:lolsign:

Thnx sis :thankyou:

Already looking forward to the next poem!!! :)

creedsister 01-18-2004 09:51 PM

:jam: :goodnight :user: ttyl :D

WeatheredWoman 01-18-2004 10:00 PM

:D ttyl :user: :goodnight :jam:


;)

creedsister 01-19-2004 03:34 PM

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Originally Posted by WeatheredWoman
:D ttyl :user: :goodnight :jam:


;)

its later now but were our ya :(

Sincirr 01-21-2004 10:43 AM

Hello.
Youre such a prolific poet.

Good stuff!

creedsister 01-21-2004 01:47 PM

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Originally Posted by Sincirr
Hello.
Youre such a prolific poet.

Good stuff!

Hello to you to haha thanks


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