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Aimee 01-13-2004 12:38 PM

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By: Amy Aumick 2004

No matter where I go
Where I turn
No matter who it is
I burn
Inside for a life
That isn’t like the other
When I ask the sun
Why
I suffer
Can’t find a path
Where life and love doesn’t falter
Thought I’d ask the sky
Thought he’d tell me
All the answers I long to find
Today
Tomorrow seems too far away

creedsister 01-13-2004 12:45 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Aimee
By: Amy Aumick 2004

No matter where I go
Where I turn
No matter who it is
I burn
Inside for a life
That isn’t like the other
When I ask the sun
Why
I suffer
Can’t find a path
Where life and love doesn’t falter
Thought I’d ask the sky
Thought he’d tell me
All the answers I long to find
Today
Tomorrow seems too far away

really liked that one i like the very last line :)

creedsister 01-13-2004 12:46 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Aimee
By: Amy Aumick 2004

No matter where I go
Where I turn
No matter who it is
I burn
Inside for a life
That isn’t like the other
When I ask the sun
Why
I suffer
Can’t find a path
Where life and love doesn’t falter
Thought I’d ask the sky
Thought he’d tell me
All the answers I long to find
Today
Tomorrow seems too far away

really liked that one i like the very last line :D

Dogstar 01-14-2004 12:53 AM

Very cool, Aimee...That opening is terrific!

Aimee 01-16-2004 09:30 AM

Thank you very much, y'all
:o

TeriB19 01-16-2004 11:16 AM

Great Amy!!! Love the last line.


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