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Ann Allusion 07-13-2004 12:30 PM

If Time Stood Still
 
If Time Stood Still

If time stood still would you wait for me?
In a field of flowers
By an old oak tree….
Wind in your hair…
Blowin’ wild and free
Warmed by the sun
Would you wait for me?

If time stood still would you wait for me?
Hold in your heart
Old memories…
Of times gone by
And times to be
See me in dreams…
Would you wait for me?

Would you move mountains
Search endlessly
Do you think you’d know me?
See thru my transparencies

If time stood still would you wait for me?
Alas, it can’t
That’s absurdity…
Yet,
Anything’s possible
When we believe
Miracles happen
Would you wait for me?

©2004
Susan D.


just one of those things that wrote it's self again...hope y'all enjoy... :)

~peace

creedsister 07-13-2004 03:04 PM

That was Soul touching Like A Quiet whisper Ann, Would you move , mountains search endlessly DO YOU THINK YOU,D KNOW ME THRU MY TRANSPARENCIES :thumbsup:

Ann Allusion 07-14-2004 02:47 AM

thank you for reading, creedsister...sometimes more can be said with a whisper than with a shout...;)

creedsister 07-14-2004 02:32 PM

oh i know :smokin:

Dogstar 07-14-2004 05:54 PM

Love that one, Ann...this is my favorite part.

Would you move mountains
Search endlessly
Do you think you’d know me?
See thru my transparencies

I don't know if I'm on target with my little interpretation, but that verse makes me think of a bigger implication: Am I worthy?

I like words that make me think.

JulieCitySlicker 07-14-2004 06:29 PM

Very good poem Ann Allusion:)

Ann Allusion 07-15-2004 04:31 PM

thank you for your kind replies and for reading this piece....glad y'all enjoyed it... :)

~peace

HR2004 07-15-2004 07:26 PM

awesome like it


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