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creedfaner 10-09-2002 11:41 PM

"I Tried"
 
I wrote this song while i was in the middle of the the three day process of breaking up with my ex. Enjoy!

I Tried
We just had the biggest fight now,
What did I do now?
This is just misunderstanding,
Dont you see that?
The why oh why's!
Is this hell I am facing...

I tried to be perfect in His eyes for you,
I tried to be perfect for you,
I tried to be everything for you,
I did everything for you,
I stayed alive for you
I tried to live to be the perfect.
I failed once again...
I failed you, I failed myself.

What did I do wrong?
I am this close to losing you,
And I think I'm scared,
I am this close to losing you again,
Its all closing in on me one more time.

I tried to be perfect in His eyes for you,
I tried to be perfect for you,
I tried to be everything for you,
I did everything for you,
I stayed alive for you
I tried to live to be the perfect.
I failed once again...
I failed you, I failed myself.

I tried to be your everything,
I hoped to save you everything unclean.
I failed at what i set my goal as.
I failed you, I failed myself again.

What did I do wrong?
Tell me please,
What started this.
I think you're going to leave me,
I know you're going to leave me.
The why oh why's.

I tried to be your superman,
I tried to be perfect,
I tried to be your everything,
I tried to love you,
I tried to care for your needs.
But it has all fallen apert now.
It is all gone away.
The why oh why's.

So let me remind you before i go...
I gave you the world,
And in return,
I got a grain of sand.

So now in our weeps,
I will leave you.
I will leave you.
I will leave you.
I will leave you


what do you think?

Siana 10-11-2002 07:59 AM

it's nice :)

Lady Valkyrie 10-11-2002 09:13 AM

That song descibed me when I left my second husband who is an alcoholic. I liked the song by the way.

Siana 10-11-2002 10:37 AM

i'm sorry to hear that about your husband :(

Lady Valkyrie 10-14-2002 08:46 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Siana
i'm sorry to hear that about your husband :(



Thank you... however, I am so over him. He truely needs help...and needs someone to love but my kids deserve better. I will always love him as a person... but I am no longer "in love" with him. But thank you anyways, hon. :)

Siana 10-17-2002 09:09 AM

no need to thank me :)

PaulMcCoygirl 11-16-2002 01:49 AM

Very nice!


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