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nagpo 06-22-2008 04:11 PM

Hey
 
Just realized
That you're just
As selfish as me

A whore
With no goal
Running the streets

Took me for a night away
In my mind I'm still in bed

I awake to find that she's arrived
But now I'm closer to the end

I payed the cash
I gave my dues
And out the window she wen't
Out the window she wen't

The daily snake
Won't bite the shake
If you take it and break it

But the risk is not worth
The gain if you lose it
Oh how I've lost it

She left the sunday
That I breathed for severance
Only to never hear from her again

When I look back
I don't think I would have bothered

If I was her
I would have done
The same thing

...The same selfish thing

bilal 06-23-2008 12:05 PM

Re: Hey
 
i like the idea.... Nicely arranged.....
Thanks for posting....

nagpo 06-23-2008 03:50 PM

Re: Hey
 
yup, yup. Not my best by far. I'll upload more soon.

TrulyAmazing 06-23-2008 09:33 PM

Re: Hey
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by nagpo
yup, yup. Not my best by far. I'll upload more soon.

ya know what nagpo very well written from the way all the verses just sorta pop out from the idea of the many Interpertations i cant see that fell in all the lines wonderfully written i give it 4 stars **** Awsome somebody woke up with their groove on

nagpo 06-23-2008 10:19 PM

Re: Hey
 
really? thanks a bunch:)

TrulyAmazing 06-23-2008 10:33 PM

Re: Hey
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by nagpo
really? thanks a bunch:)

:) your welcome i love being the potery crtic its groovy

nagpo 06-23-2008 10:54 PM

Re: Hey
 
lol, sounds like a good career choice.

TrulyAmazing 06-23-2008 11:22 PM

Re: Hey
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by nagpo
lol, sounds like a good career choice.

Haaaaaaaaaa :)


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