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a song i wrote...

Walking along a lonley street
I get struck down by the devils fleet
Now he lays their next to me
Telling me all kinds of things
As he sticks his fork straight down through my heart

He whispers all those naughty things of gold
And women Ill ever need
He promised them...but I just had to sit and think for awhile

(chorus)
You can take my soul, you can take my breath
You can take my freedom but don't forget
An eye's for an eye and soon you'll get what's comin' to you
(end chorus)

I've figured what I'm gonna do
I'm gonna go down to Hell with you
But not for the reason you had planned to
So I grab my friends and there we go

Now we see the Devils thrown
We scream to him with our words of gold

(chorus)
You can take my soul, you can take my breath
You can take my freedom but don't forget
An eye's for an eye and you'll get what's comin' to you

You can take my heart, you can take my life
Please take me forever, but don't deny
That an eye's for an eye and you'll get what's comin' to you
(end)
You will get whats comin' to you
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Re: a song i wrote...

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Originally Posted by remedy1107

i love it :D

thank u:) :)

Re: a song i wrote...

that could have been the 11th song on my own prison! :D

Re: a song i wrote...

it was great i fell into the closing lines :)

Re: a song i wrote...

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Originally Posted by facelessmike

that could have been the 11th song on my own prison! :D

thats the best complement i have ever gotten. thak u so very much:)