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inside_us_all04 01-10-2006 01:10 AM

a song i wrote
 
how can you just wannabe friends
when i feel this way about you
and just want so much more from you
i love everything about you
so when i hear this it saddens me so
cuz i love you so fuckin much
ive fallen in love you with so much
so to hear you utter those words
is a slap in the face
cuz i just wannabe with you more

everything is falling apart
and i dont know how to figure out
away to get outa this fuckin mess
just sayin to be friends aint much
when i dream about so much more

cuz everytime i think about you now
tears wanna role down my face
yet i still wanna talk to you everyday
n know how you are
this aint making it any easier on us
in this fuckin after math
but i just wanna tell you
that im still fuckin in love with you

everything is falling apart
and i dont know how to figure out
away to get outa this fuckin mess
just sayin to be friends aint much

Lunar Shadow 01-20-2006 05:30 AM

Re: a song i wrote
 
I can relate with these lyrics I can say that many (including myself) have felt this way before....


do you have any music to go with it yet??

Anna1011 01-20-2006 06:12 AM

Re: a song i wrote
 
wow! this is exactly how im feeling right now.

nice writing :)

Rocketqueen 02-10-2006 03:07 PM

Re: a song i wrote
 
:D WOW i wish i could be so bold to write like that, THAT KICKED ASS,


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