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HR2004 04-07-2005 05:14 PM

Oh your touch
 
Oh your touch.
Oh your sweet...sweet touch.
Such a deep place...
Place in my heart.
You occupy.
Keep me alive.
Everything about you...
Seduces me.
It take all my strenght to contain myself.
Knowing of what is capable.
When no one is around.
Surronded in a romance.
Imprisioned in these feelings.
All the love are we willing.
Wanting to show my affection.
Oh your touch.
Oh your sweet...sweet touch.
Your embrace...
Your sweet...sweet embrace.
Oh your hugs...
Oh your sweet...sweet hugs.
Your lips.
Your strong...strong lips.
Strong yet gentle when we kiss.
Oh your voice.
Oh your sweet...sweet voice.
The sound takes me away.
Oh your touch.
Oh your sweet...sweet touch.
How can I refuse...
When all I can think of...
is your sweet...sweet touch.
When our eyes meet.
Theres no way to say no.
All it takes is the way you say please.

creedsister 04-07-2005 09:07 PM

:jam: :jam: :jam: :jam: :jam: :jam: :jam: ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~AWSOME~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Ann Allusion 04-08-2005 08:32 AM

really like the ending:

When our eyes meet.
Theres no way to say no.
All it takes is the way you say please.


awewsome write...:rockon:

HR2004 04-08-2005 11:05 AM

thank you both!

Dogstar 04-10-2005 07:57 PM

Very cool, HR. I love the visual I get in my mind on this. Well done!

HR2004 04-11-2005 04:32 PM

thanks I really loved writting this one it was fun!


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