Valley of The Damned
 

"I watch as angels fall to my feet
I'll use them to shield myself from the heat
I used their broken wings to try and fly
But crashed and burned and then began to cry
I feel like just a grain of sand
Here in the valley of the damned

Here in this darkness I need a light
A light to guide me Home
Here in this darkness I feel so cold
So cold and so alone

I try to shield myself from the hauntings sounds
As my breath slowly fades and my heart starts to pound
Im running from the voices that tell me to give up
I cant take it anymore,Father,please take my cup!
Im just like a grain of sand
Here in the valley of the damned

Here in this darkness I see a light
A light telling me to keep pressing on
Here in this darkness I hear a voice
A voice telling me soon this will all be gone

...have mercy on me
I just lost sight on all that could set me free
I ran away from You because I couldnt see
I tried to hide because of all my selfish lies
I only thought of myself and couldnt lose my pride
But now I realize that none of that was worth losing life
A thousand times I cried for You,but out came the knife
I died a selfish death I know,I only thought of me
I should have lived for You alone,for only You could set me free!!!

Here in this darkness I am not alone
My Father is here holding me,He will take me Home
Here in this darkness I have a best friend
A friend who wants to be with me until the very end."


Thats my newest,hope you like it! :D

Great rhyming, loved the theme, loved the rhythm is awesome. Keep it up. This is definately in the top three of urs I like the most.

Thanks alot Kim :D

I think that one's my favorite. :D

Thanks alot!!! :D

I really liked it hehe~~Mercy is what keeps us Really i know these things ROCK ON :D :D :D

thanks alot Ta :D

your welcome by the way :D

Nice man. I can totally place myself right into it. This is one of your best yet. I can even hear it (in many different forms) as I read it. Awesome!!

Thanks alot :D