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OTHER SIDE (a poem)
I sense snapping jaws
of weighted darkness trying, relentlessly, to devour the essence of my fatigued soul. Its wretched arms squeeze, tightly, around my weakened body, desiring to gasp my last breath from me. I twist and try to run but fall deeper into its greedy pits and further sink into the belly of its entrapment. Its hands are cold and thieving. It longs to possesss the whole of who I am. It craves all I have ever been. It scratches and claws, tying to pull me under where it can steal my precious life. I'm almost smothering. I strain to recall how to turn the key that will set my soul free. I struggle within to find some part of me which will loosen this vise encasing me. I push against its will and might and break through the darkness before me and embrace the glorious light waitng on the other side. ©2003 L.A. |
Hello everyone, :D
Comments and suggestions are most welcomed and appreciated! Peace to you all!! ~Honey~ :) |
Another great poem, Honey.:) The words you use clearly speak to what you were feeling and I enjoyed reading it because I understood exactly what you were writing about.
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Hey Sheila,
I am so glad you read my poem. I love hearing from you. I am glad you liked and understood it. Have you made any decision about writing yourself? I would be honored to read your work! Thanks again for the read. ~Honey~:) |
You're welcome, Honey. And yes, I'm definitely interested in writing and I actually wrote a short poem the other night. I'll share it with you in a pm. I'll send it before I leave the bb tonight.:)
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Sheila, :D
Okay, I am anxious to read it!! :dancing: ~Honey~ :) |
Sheila,
Can I see it too??? |
Hi Aimee, :D
I think it would be great if Sheila would share it with you! It is really a very good poem! ~Honey~ :) |
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Sure, Aimee.:) I'll post it in a separate thread in a few minutes. |
Wow! Honey, that was a deep but wonderful poem;) I really liked it a lot!
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Hi Julie, :D
I am so glad you liked it!! I really appreciate you stopping by!!:bounce: I hope you will again!! My best to you!! ~Honey~:) |
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Will Do Honey;) :D |
Hi Julie,
Thanks again. I was just wondering do you write too? If so, I hope you'll post something soon. I love reading and sharing poetry. It lifts my soul!! See ya!! :dancing: ~Honey~ :) |
I've written a few poems Honey and have posted them here try looking on one of the back pages;) :angel:
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