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HR2004 02-08-2005 04:00 PM

emotions free
 
Happiness overcomes me.
I run from the smile.
Fear rushes through me.
I let no one read me.
Anger embraces me.
I quickly put the flames out.
Pain races in me.
I hide it behind the walls.
Though the fear hidden deep.
Still within me.
Afraid to smile.
Scared of letting fear get me.
Afraid to unlease the anger.
Scared to face the pain.
Still holding up the walls.
Built around my heart.
Where emotions play and secrets decay.
Wont let anyone come within these four walls.
Barries not meant to be broken.
But someone is still trying to get in.
Scared to escape from these walls.
Someone still chipping and making a hole.
The little girl inside goes in the corner,
Sheads the tears that never cease.
Then when the light peers through.
Happiness renewed.
The light is the way out.
Choosing to take a chance.
She reaches her hand out.
Someones soft warm hand holds on to hers
and sets her free.
The walls crumble all around her.
All emotions finally free.
She looks at her rescurer.
Thanks for never giving up on me.

creedsister 02-08-2005 08:50 PM

liked it alot :jam: :jam: :jam: :jam: :jam: :jam:

Anna1011 02-09-2005 02:06 PM

have to say the brought a tear to my eye, was really nice.

HR2004 02-09-2005 02:25 PM

Thanks for your kind words.Also making someone cry by reading my feelings lets me know im not alone that people really do care thanx again.


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