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HR2004 06-13-2005 12:33 AM

The pain
 
My prison...
My torment...
My life...
I walk outside...
The rain falls as hard as it can...
Mixing in with my tears...
Making me go cold...
The lighting strikes...
Behind...
The thunder shakes me...
The pain so deep...
Bleeding inside...
Heart acheing...
How could you do this to me...
Wet...
Falling in the puddles...
Pushing me farther...
Kicking me harder...
Gasping loudly...
Cant breathe...
No air to retrieve...
The hurting killing me...
Fast...
The last...
Time I find...
I look up towards the sky...
Overcast and wet...
laying down...
On the wet ground...
letting go of everything...
My head falls back...
Hits the hard earth...
Everything starts spinning...
There is no winning...
In this prison...
The pain finally killed me...

creedsister 06-13-2005 02:47 PM

:jam: :jam: :jam: :jam: :jam: :jam: :jam: that was good

Ann Allusion 06-13-2005 03:24 PM

that was "painful" to read...very good, though...:rockon:

MissSeeker 06-13-2005 03:51 PM

Good writing HR2004

HR2004 06-14-2005 11:17 AM

thanks you guys!


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