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tremonti4life04 04-08-2005 04:14 AM

Failing Me
 
I took a walk to the bottom of the hill the other day
Such an empty search for my sanity
I looked over the distance to where I last felt peace
And begged to the heavens for serenity

[Chorus]
All I got was eptiness
Failing me once again
Trust so strong But let down hard
Everything I thought was real
Another empty search
Another empty search
A little white lie in the sky

I traveled down the road many have traveled before
Another empty search for my soul
I whispered into the dark, for just one spark of hope
The darkness leaving me so unfulfilled

(Chorus)

I need a chance at life again
A chance to live, to breathe on my own
I want to change my life around
But its so hard, when you fall on the only road you know

Ann Allusion 04-08-2005 08:24 AM

a very "searching" piece...may you find what you are looking for and get what you deserve.

Does it have a title?

tremonti4life04 04-08-2005 09:48 AM

its called Failing Me

creedsister 04-08-2005 11:02 AM

:) ....begged to the heavens...i liked that line.... :jam: :jam: :jam: :jam: :jam: :jam: :jam: :)

HR2004 04-08-2005 11:07 AM

that was really good!

Dogstar 04-10-2005 07:52 PM

Wow, very cool!

That last line is a killer:

I want to change my life around
But its so hard, when you fall on the only road you know

:clap:


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