Breakdown
 

I cannot fault you
For running away
I cannot blame you
For not wanting to stay
I shattered your final threshold of pain
I pushed you over and crushed what remained

Wash me away like blood from your hands
Banish me to the cellar of your soul
I am not worthy of a place in your heart
I will only work to tear you apart

I cannot fault you
For trusting in me
I cannot blame you
For believing in me
I broke your will when I fell yet again
I killed your hope when I let the devil win

Dust me off your virgin marble table
Blow me away from your cracked window sill
I am not worthy of a place in your heart
I will only work to break you apart

Great job Kerri, I really liked the last stanza. :clap:

Many thanks, Creed_Defaultgirl!

That is one powerful statement. Outstanding job Kerri. You should definitely be published, girl.

Have to go with Teri here. Great work , Kerri. Sounds a little Maynardish( :laugh: ) to me.
Very strong, emotional words! :clap:

LOL @ Maynardish (it sounds like a condiment, hehehe)...thank you, ladies. As always, you are too kind!

ROTFLMFAO!!!! A condiment ,huh!! You are too much!! :laugh:

:D...Like a cross between mayo/relish...I'm just leaving it at that...my mind is going in naughty places :D

Well, when it comes to Maynard my mind always wanders in dirty places. :naughty:

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Hahahahaha, same here!!! GREAT avie! :drool:

Thats the part i liked too, Great Title Too :D

Thank you kindly, creedsister!

LOL, I was thinking the same thing. ;)

Great poem, Kerri.:clap: :clap:

I agree with Terri and Kris, you should be published.

wow good job

does kinda have a "Sober" feel to it...lol...some nice writing, dogstar... :smokin: