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Why?
Do you ever lie there on your bed
After another day of minadering by The question remains why is it so? Seems the world is sleeping in a state of televised apathy Who are the ascended ones and why is it so? We're just dots in this ever shrinking globe spinning spinning All resemblance light years away In re-entry its burned away And the residue is mislabelled mankind A once glorious past somewhere down this lense We're all programmed to act this way Aim for the stars, they know only few will see All but the lucky ones feel abused Why were we laid? Simply to edify the few? Shadows paint the scenes On this ever expanding canvas Telling of unfulfilled dreams now living in eternal regret The masses making Benjamins for all but themselves Living week by week While the few save for what they know they can't buy All blades of grass the sun will soon enough forget All slaves to the system, a star that seems to favour only some Look down this microscope and see the ant it knows its place knows it is just one of many its role clearly defined, specified If they had just five minutes again Would the script and actors remain the same? |
hmmmm....good :D
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Nice, hide....See a little PJ influence there ;)...The questions you raise are thought-provoking Your stuff always makes me think. Thanks for sharing!
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I liked this one, Hide because it questions destiny and place without being bitter (if that makes any sense to you)
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me "borrow" some stuff from other artists and Eddie Vedder espesically no way! :) Well there is some stuff from PJ, Creed and a tiny bit from Staind there so all in all if I ever published this I would need a good lawyer! LOL
Its good if I can make anyone think, this is one subject I seem to keep writing about. I had one of the early lines and that was it and it just grew into this. That is what happens most of the time actually think of a couple of good lines and it just grows from there. |
Yep, me, too. Often a phrase will pop into my head and I'll just right it down if I really like it...Sometimes it takes a while, but it usually ends up in something I write.
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yeah sometimes something will pop into my head when i can't write it down and i'm thinking no not now, i'll forget it! sometimes i even get them from mishearing things people say or lyrics in songs and think hey that sounds okay! |
Hahaha, that's why I try to write them down immediately, because I know I'll forget them...senior moments, ya know ;).
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"And the residue is mislabelled mankind"...wooooooooahhhhhhh!!!!!! man! cool!
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ummm sounds familiar.....:) |
hehe.
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Another great one
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